I am Luis Carlos Maldonado.I am 25 years old. I am
from Colombia.I am single and I live in barranquilla.
I studied professional welding at SENA 6 years ago. I worked for
cementos caribe, now known as argos,I was a welder there.after, I
worked in Comdistral, I was machine operator"welding".now,I am not working but I am studying english at CCCA. I am in level 3a, actually
I love to study english.
I am a hard- worker, sensible, generous, friendly. But sometimes I am grumpy.
And, in my free time I like to play soccer,play station,listen to music and I
like to go out with my friends on weekends.As for food I like eating
all kind of food,especially roast chicken.I live in " las nives "
neighborhood with my mother.I have a big family. I have four
brothers and one sister.they are good brothers and they treat me very
well.I love my family.
3 comentarios:
Hi luis. I found one mistake in your composition. You can't say: I worked in Cementos del Caribe, you should say: I worked for Cementos del Caribe
Hi Luis,...good Blog,...well men I just found some mistakes; in your greeting is Hi everybody ¡¡¡¡ and in your last paragraph you start with "And my free time",.. I think it should be "In my free time" or "And, in my free time". The rest all fine. Be careful ¡¡ God Bye ¡¡
Hello Luis Carlos! Your blog is good, however you can improve some things. I suggest you don’t use many periods, you can use commas instead. Also, you wrote “a excellent” and “and my free time”. The correct way is “an excellent” and “In my free time”.
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